Score: 8

"AMV Hell much?"

submission: Ultimate Ace Attorney FF

date: June 24, 2008

This is an amazingly well done fan flash. References, check. Animation skills, check. Character drawing skills... well, everyone needs something to work on. If I can tell you one thing to work on, it's that some of the actual character drawings got a little sloppy during the faster segments. That's to be expected I guess but still something you might want to work on. Also, the sound quality/volume is lacking in some portions.

Score: 7

"A noticable improvement"

submission: Indiada Jodes

date: June 8, 2008

To anyone who says Irod Bad was funnier: "Irod Bad Irod Bad Irod Bad" There... world's funniest review. To the author: Nice job or at least nicer job.

Your previous work basically made me expect this to be the words "Indiana Jodes" again and again till I wanted to scoop my brains out with an ice cream scoop. Thankfully you did better this time around. Sure, quick description of the movie not particularly hilarious but you're getting quite a few points for the end song, which was the best part of the movie.

Then again, I'm pickier than like, 90% of the people on Newgrounds judging from the fact that just about everything that ever got front paged gets 10s from almost everyone.

What I'm saying is that it's a movie. Not a particularly bad or good movie, just a movie. But you're improving with each one.

Score: 10

"My grandkids are quite lucky"

submission: 2 - The Story of Khale

date: May 15, 2008

if that Episode 2 of 42 thing is right they'll be around to see your grandkids finish up with episode 42. And it's gonna be quite a series. I am of course, kidding about the 42 episodes. If you think you're gonna be able to crank them out, go for it. You've created quite a world to play with and I expect great things from it. I love the way that you've managed to outdo most of the other intentionally long series on newgrounds. So many of them get so wrapped up in trying to convey the feeling they want to their viewers that they forget the best way to do it. Just show us what you envision in that world and we'll feel however we like about it. And I feel that this series is gonna turn out pretty badass. I'd say "Don't disappoint me" but it'd take some series fucking up between now and then to turn this series into anything I'd be disappointed by.

All strange discussion aside, you're doing great. Keep up the good work.

Score: 4

"I get what you're going for"

submission: Irod Bad!

date: May 10, 2008

But lets face it... The words "Iron Man" aren't funny. 90% of this is just those two words, which keeps it from really being that funny. With egoraptor, it's something different. The rants have to do with everything from killing dogs with sweat to random gameplay mechanics but this... You said "Iron Man" a bunch of times in an annoying voice. Not really all that funny. Your animation style is good though and is pretty much the reason I saw fit to give an otherwise very poor movie a 4. Seriously, if you're going to try to do an "out there" movie parody, make it so that it's actually "out there" rather than just an annoying voice describing said movie.

Score: 6

"Let's face it... it's okay"

submission: Join The Tankmen Army!

date: April 30, 2008

Okay pretty much describes this movie to a tee. The animation wasn't bad. The voices were fitting. The jokes, though not really funny, were frequent enough that I didn't stop watching it. The thing is... This is like a billion other army parodies but with Tankmen. Sorry dude, but this wasn't really anything all that amazing. If I have to put blame on one thing, it's the jokes. Repetition is only funny if it's done right (see pretty much any British comedy for details on making repetition funny). Beyond that, your content came closer to the real army than a bunch of post apocalyptic tankmen (if that was intentional, please excuse that one).

Score: 7

"Nanaca Crash still plays better."

submission: Fanta Dash

date: April 17, 2008

I'm gonna be honest. Like, 70% of this score comes from having a better intro movie than pretty much any other game on the planet. In fact, I gave you more credit for the movie than the game. Not to say I didn't like the game, but it's been done before. Just, without the shameless yet comical endorsement. And in all honesty, this isn't the world's best example of this type of game (That would be Nanaca Crash). But it's still a solid, fun game with a great intro movie. Next time you want cash, you might just want to make commercials.

Score: 5

"Work on the atmosphere"

submission: Violette in Halloween

date: April 13, 2008

Overall, it needed to be darker, the room needed to have a slightly creepier feel too it. The landscape outside the window needed to be bleak and frightening. Don't take this as being bad. I liked the character design and the music choice. But you could have easily done a bit more with it. Basically, what I'm saying is that you might want to edit this flash a bit in time for the real Halloween instead of Aprilween but good job anyway

Score: 10

"Wow... I gave out a 10..."

submission: Mastermind 3

date: April 12, 2008

I don't do that too often anymore. But damn. If there was someone deserving of it. It's you. This series is stylish. It's genuinely funny in a way that so much of the content on newgrounds is not. In the event that I do ever end up ruling the world, not making more of these will be punishable by death. So please, make more. I love this series way too much for them to not continue.

Score: 3

"You get 3 stars for the joke"

submission: Portal: Batteries.

date: April 12, 2008

The joke was funny. The delivery was not. You needed to shorten the dialog. Most definitely get someone better than the auto-voice to imitate Glados and you might want to up the animation quality too if that's at all possible. Basically, you've got a good setup in theory but more work needs to be put into the delivery. And for the record, it's a pretty decent first animation but I do not give people more credit just because it's your first animation. Still, overall, decent job.

Score: 5

"There is too much ice in space"

submission: Broken Wings

date: April 11, 2008

I keep sliding around on it...
Also, the walls of space are made of rubber and it sucks...
Basically, I can deal with weak weapons and alot of difficulty but I need to be able to control my fucking ship. Which I flat out can't do. You mention a different movement mode in the comments. Finish that up and we'll talk then.